Hey Superstar - revised ;)

So. The next morning after writing the original version of "Hey Superstar", God somehow told me that i could turn this to a more dynamic acapella or pop/ 80s disco version. So, that's what I did last Friday: revising this song :)

Well. Same basic story, inspired by my super-frequent tv appearance of my favourite band, singing their first single from the newly-released third album. Some words should be added to match the phrasing, and turn out that the song got a lil 'belibet' when i first tried singing it. Haha. 

I'm kinda satisfied, however. The previously all-verses-no-chorus song now have verses, choruses, and bridge. More chords (FYI, I cant identify the chord, I can only sing the song :p). more dynamic, and somehow.. more HHS-inspired! An even better news is, when i asked my mom to listen to my pre-recorded voice singing this song, she had no complain on the song! Can't wait to record this with my handsome brother-guitarist :D

Aaaaaaaannd here it is: "Hey Superstar!" - pop version

Hey superstar! Been watching you from afar

You look so good, you sound so good, how lovely you are!

You got me daydreaming all day, hope someday I'll go far

I'll reach for you, I'll be with you
No matter where you are

Hey superstar! You are my waking alarm

You're on TV and i'll go cheesy and wild

You do this and you do that, got the crowd scream and shout

I know you work hard, but i thought, so what?

As long as i scream as hard

Then suddenly, suddenly I wonder

Hey superstar! I wonder, do you ever sigh?

You work right here, you go right there, aren't you ever tired?

You jump like this, you move like that, don't you sometimes wanna cry? 

Hey superstar! You got me stare at face in the mirror

For the mirror don't lie, so i just hope I won't see

A lazzy-go-dreamy, such a pillow-bound me

A wasteful face, complicated maze, faraway from what you are

So immediately, immediately I gather up

Hey superstar! For I feel that you never sigh

You work right here, you go right there, you're just never tired

You jump like this, you move like that, you never show you wanna cry

Hey superstar! You 'slap' me on my cheek!

You make me think, you show me how I've been weepy and weak

Put my finger at this, put the blame in all that

when the real trouble a** is me

Hey superstar! you said time after time 

Life is only once, shouldn't wait till it's too late

And I never, not again, let myself whine and complain

For where there's pain, there i may gain

There I may gain

Hey superstar! d'you know how lovely you are?

You sound so good, you look so good, I'm just convinced you'll go far

And I will stay as fans all day though sometimes I'll miss out

I'll work as hard as you have worked hard
I'll meet you at the TOP

I'll meet you at the TOP

Hey superstar! Keep the music playing, live and loud! :D